Tuesday, November 2, 2010

coercive tu apa?

when all the pieces of time,
let me believe in all eulogy rhyme,
i found the great hunting of wine,
reddish yet bluish in jar of mine.

the voice could have let me to win,
wanting the sky to feel into grin,
close the windows out of my skin,
and try to be better other than spin..

let smooth let it passive,
as long as there is no coercive.

~jom makan kon fleks

4 comments:

schueism said...

poem yg sgt deep

bella. said...

bella skong syu!!

longtailedmonkey said...

tak faham pun.. but maksud coercive according to my online emergency thesaurus is forcible. The synonyms are bullying, forced, forceful, intimidating.. bila masa I became an annoying repetitive typewriter?
ah well, still don't get the poem.

ERu said...

haha. gud2